Wednesday, 6 February 2019

'Darkness' by Connie E

Darkness

As the mist crossed the eerie sky, the thick, impregnable trees towered over the land. The overgrown bushes swallowed the path as the moon beamed in the night sky. Something appeared. Her eyes flashed with horror as they sunk into its sallow face. Her lips cracked with frustration as she stumbled towards her. The air got tighter and tighter as ever-thickening mud fell asleep on her shoes. Then, all you could possibly see was darkness.

2 comments:

  1. I love all the amazing adjective in there and you built the tension up well. Great!

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    1. Thankyou Millie for your nice comment!

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