Thursday, 7 February 2019

'The Way' by Amelia

Darkness consumed me. I shiver from my surroundings and take a step. I look forward and check my pocket; Fluffy is still there. I move around to look for an exit; it's like living in a parallel universe. Above is a small, wooden hut with a few steps. One, two, three, four, five. There appeared to be more. I have been going up for ages. I appear to be getting nowhere.

Up and down. Up and down. I rush ahead. I can't go up but I can't go down. Is it a trap? Maybe. I'm suppose to go left or right but neither work. I go to the very top where there is a forcefield. My foot slides through the step. I fall.

I land under the hut. I saw something. I crawl to reach it and can see it says number thirteen. I decide to proceed. There were two cars: number thirteen and number thirteen. I chose the first one. It all starts to make sense and I know what I have to do.

1 comment:

  1. I love this Amelia, you built up tension really well.Amazing!

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